OLC40P: Ontario Secondary School Literacy Course
Prompts:
Then think aloud using the following prompts:
A TYPICAL NEWSPAPER ARTICLE CONTAINS FIVE (5) PARTS:
Headline: |
This is a short, attention-getting statement about the event. |
Byline: (The name of the paper follows the Byline) |
This tells who wrote the story.
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Lead paragraph: (first paragraph) |
This has ALL of the who, what, when, where in it. A writer must find the answers to these questions and write them into the opening sentence(s) of the article. |
Explanation: (second, third…paragraphs) |
After the lead paragraph has been written, the writer must decide what other facts or details the reader might want to know. This section has the " why and how ". The writer must make sure that he/she has enough information to answer any important questions a reader might have after reading the headline and the lead paragraph. This section can also include direct quotes from witnesses or bystanders. |
Additional Information: (last paragraph) |
This information is the least important. Thus, if the news article is too long for the space it needs to fill, it can be shortened without rewriting any other part. This part can include information about a similar event. |
We've already discussed headlines in Activity 2. In this Activity, we will focus on the Lead paragraph or the first paragraph (first tier).
As indicated in the chart above, the Lead paragraph has ALL the "who, what, when, where" in it. A writer must find the answers to these questions and write them into the opening sentence(s) of the article.
Let us now apply this to the exemplar.
1 75 cents to $100,000 2 Montreal student Warren Hill picked up this rare recording for pennies at a street sale in New York. Now he's put the disc on eBay and a bidding war has exploded 3 JAMES ADAMS 4 From Tuesday's Globe and Mail (2006) 5 A fragile preliminary pressing of the legendary 1967 debut vinyl recording by the Velvet Underground, bought by a Canadian collector four years ago for only 75 cents, is now for sale on eBay. As of yesterday afternoon, bidding had passed $110,000 ( U.S.). The auction concludes Friday evening. 6 The acetate -- as the acetone-covered aluminum disc is called in music circles -- was posted for sale on Nov. 28 and in less than 72 hours it had scored more than 10,000 hits, with 70 individuals submitting bids, including the kick-off offer of $26.24. Bidding leaped to the $100,000 threshold early Sunday after various collectors had slowly pushed the action into the mid-five figures. Montrealer Warren Hill bought the acetate at a street sale in lower Manhattan in September, 2002. A history student at the time at Concordia University, Hill, then 25, didn't know what he had purchased -- but later he and a friend, Eric Isaacson, proprietor of Mississippi Records and Repairs in Portland, Ore., determined that it was, in fact, a high-quality, likely heretofore never-played alternate version of The Velvet Underground and Nico, produced in New York in mid-1966. Yesterday, Hill said he "[didn't] want to get too excited" by the interest the acetate is eliciting. "I don't know if people are scamming or what. If it comes true, great. But I'm not going to get super excited until the auction is over and the buyer is legit. I've been excited before and it didn't pan out." 7 Released in March, 1967, The Velvet Underground and Nico, with a cover (of a "peel slowly and see" banana) designed by the group's mentor, Andy Warhol, reportedly sold less than 50,000 copies on its first pass. But 36 years later, Rolling Stone magazine was naming it the 13th-greatest rock album of all time. The acetate is of the Velvets' first studio recording session and features two fewer songs than the 11-track recording that was sold. However, at least four of the songs have completely different arrangements than those on the official release while the remainder have alternative sound mixes. Songs include such classics as Heroin, Venus in Furs, Femme Fatale and I'll Be Your Mirror, most written by Lou Reed, all of which have been cited as major influences by artists as varied as David Bowie, U2, REM, Joy Division, Roxy Music and Sonic Youth. 8 Before going with eBay, Hill and Isaacson had thought they might sell the acetate via live auction, perhaps at one of the many collectors conventions held in the U.S., where they figured it might fetch at least $40,000. Discussions, too, were held with record companies -- but at least one label shied away from a deal after it was discovered that a Japanese bootlegger had released a three-CD set of Velvet rarities, Ultimate Mono and Acetates Album, featuring some of the same mixes on the acetate. Had the Japanese material originated from tapes made from Hill's acetate decades before he purchased it? Or was there another acetate in circulation? No one seems to know. |
Stop or Before You Proceed If you have any questions, please ask your teacher before proceeding to the practice activity.
Exemplar: The Lead Paragraph In this news report, you will see how the lead paragraph contains the "who, what, when and where". Remember to refer to this exemplar when doing your assignment.
Lead paragraph (5) |
Details |
Who |
Canadian collector |
What |
The legendary 1967 debut vinyl recording |
When |
2006 |
Where |
eBay |
This is very important for you to remember when you write your news report at the end of this unit.
Journal Was it easier to apply ‘during reading’ strategies to the news report, compared to the Anecdote and biography in Unit 2? Explain your answer using specifics.
Review Review the ‘during reading’ strategies as you will need to apply these to the reading of "Tiers 2 and 3".
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